Ode to find your "Hari"-ness

Dear fellow aatmans, Here is me giving a shot at something different. Hope , you would bear with it :) Please Do let me know your thoughts. CAVEAT: This is my first ever attempt Aye young man, You seeketh that One moment of pride, You seeketh that fleeting time amidst mansions Your mind , jumping like a monkey From One Object to another. Aye young man, You give your ears to all kinds of noise. Your eyes, unaware of the demon veiled by illusion Your tongue failing to sense the life in food What do you seeketh after all? Aye young man, Let your mind to think about Hari Your Voice anointing him with the fragrance of the Saptha Swaras Gifting your ears with the sweetness of NadaBrahmam (Divine Sound) Casting your mind upon Hari, Before eating the first morsel of Food. You ask, What else would I seeketh ?? UPDATE : Tamil Translation: Adiyen , Oru vaasgarin virupathal , meLirikkum Aangila Kavithayai Mozhipeyarka Muyandrirukkiren. Pizhaigazhai Manithu Karuthezhuthavum :) Naadinaan, andha oru gana perumaiyai Thedinaan, andha aranmanai Vaazhkayai KurangaiPOl , avan manam , Oru poruzhil Oru ganam Maru Poruzhil Maruganam Sevikku , pala vidha AravAram Peyai ariyaa maayayil avanin KanGaL Unavil Uyir Ariyaa Avan Naaku Ivaigazhai Naaduvathen? Kamalakkannanin visayil Nin Manam Iniya sapthaswarangazhal andha Vaasudevanai abishekhum Nin Kural naadhabramathAl , madhurathil nin sevigal Unbatharku mun , nin manam Avan visaiyil VerEythum Nin Manam Naadumaa? Sri SitaRamachandraarpanam Sri Krishnaarpanam